Luscious lips will kiss goodbye
With a candy coated lullaby
While anger wilts and roses bloom
Scarlett passion paints every room
In a sea of decay
A wondrous facade
That is hiding from the truth.
Author notes
options 3,4 and 5
A contest entry
- Contest of options by Angelflower.
600 points, ended October 7, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
contest, wweird, fantasy
Comments
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This had such a nice flow to it.. I love the way you combined the prompts, not many can do that and make it sound good, but you did it wonderfully, thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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I really love this poem.. the mixing of free verse and rhyme is absolutely wonderful.. I do that once in awhile too. lol I really enjoyed all of this. excellent take on the prompt
excellent poem
good luck
kat
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Nicely done... I like the mix of rhyme and free verse although I really have to stretch to capture the essence of prompt 4 in this
but that's probably more from my feelings about the picture and not recognizing yours... Keep up the splendid work. I look forward to reading more of your poems...
Ken
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