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James Is A Lazy James

James is a lazy James
he rules the XBox 360
with skills, smarts, and bordom
James is a lazy James

James is a lazy James
hes the God of games
with skill, or bordom
James is a lazy James

he rolles up his sleeves and grabs his controller
James is a lazy James
he wins the moment the game begans
James is a lazy James
James wasn't jokin when he said he was the best
It was for a reason he beat you to death
challenge and he'll win again
James is a lazy James

now when James doesnt play he sleeps
James is a lazy James
he sleeps all day
he wont wake
James is a lazy James
wont get up for school
wont get up for a disaster
he will only get up
for his XBox 360
James is a lazy James

Author notes

I tried to write this poem to my god is an awsome god tell me what you think , btw James is my best friend who I havent seen in forever.

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  • storiesuntold
    October 22, 2008

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    Oh my goodness

    This reminds me of a song my neice sang to me about her huabsnd from the song mama hes crzy she puts the words mama he's lazy hahaha what a write


  • Janice M Pickett
    September 27, 2008

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    hehehehehe Cool

    You did it very well. Poor James. LOL I wonder if he will ever read this. probably not though as he is too lazy...


    • perfectdarkangel
      September 27, 2008
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      he did read it and he said that he LOVES it, he told me that he put it on his flash drive and showed it to all of his friends and they all laughed as well *sigh* i miss him sooo much I should probably call him one of these days cause he wont call me and guess what his excuss is for never calling me.... it that hes too lazy XD


  • Tyl3r
    September 22, 2008

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    Thats...so...awesome. I love it. I'm bookmarking it. If I had more points I would praise you with a thousand clappies.


  • mcrfan322
    September 8, 2008

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    LOL its true for most guys x box is like a god or something.... im not that big of a gammer to know.... great poem keep it up


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    September 7, 2008
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    lol I like this poem, what is up with boys and x-box360s? it's like their god xD lol. Nice poem <3


  • glitterydoom
    September 7, 2008

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    your freind james sounds like my brother, he's on the x-box 360 all night and then he sleeps durning the day. I like to poke him to see if he wakes up and he never does
    nice lyrics


  • wbiro gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    I know a James, too... and I think the world will soon be full of lazy James's...! (now if that's good or bad, I don't know...) You did a good job on the "Amazing" lyrics, I'd create a few more rhymes (controller/over disaster/stratocaster)(stratocaster is a guitar, like in that guitar game)


    • perfectdarkangel
      September 7, 2008
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      hes not good at guitar games lol, hes only good at war games XD but anyway thanks.

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