Closer

Now touching,

closer,

warm breaths catching

as we lean to each other -

then the friction of lips,

and the taste of ohmygod,

your tongue, my hands, your hands

and closer now,

closer.

How much of me is touching you right now?

I need a way to touch you more,

to make this kiss last

until

I am all you.

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What Is A Kiss by nevadapoet. 700 points, ended September 8, 2008, 51 entries
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poet girl
December 21, 2008
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Wow, what a moment. "I am all you" now that is close.
Shannon
October 20, 2008

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Made me think of Buffalo Bill but perhaps that's because I just read the one about making acorns out of bones.

"how much of my body is touching you right now?"

That seems like something someone might actually think if they were capable of forming coherent thoughts in the heat of passion. Usually I just think....well, wait. I don't remember.
nevadapoet
September 8, 2008

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A beautiful wrtite with great flow and imagery. A perfect write for the contest...thanks for the entry.
Nevadapoet
Night Hope
September 6, 2008

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tomisb
September 6, 2008

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You catch the intensity and the desire. Nicely down in a quick sequence of words.
Peace & Light,
Tom B.
LalalalaLoopstah
September 6, 2008
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and the taste of ohmygod

made me say out loud, "oh my God"....
Fabulous!
Saffron
September 6, 2008
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