Take me back to when what you said was true
Back to the days when I knew what to do
Take me back to where I found true love
Back to the days when you were all I thought of
Take me back to when I was so tough
Back to the days when I was enough
Take me back to the days when life was so fair
Back to the days when you were always there
Take me back to the days when I was still whole
Back to when life hadn’t taken its toll
Take me back to the days when I loved you
Back to when I thought that you loved me too
Just take me back…
A contest entry
- *~* Enter And You Wont Regret! Many Options *~* by Shannon62875.
320 points, ended October 14, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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awww!
This is a really sad poem. Its really short but also rally good. You did a great job expressing how you felt in ths write.. Although you did use Take Me Back a little to much... IT started to get old after the first 3 times... but anyway it was a really great write! Good luck in my contest...
Shannon*Leah
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I really like this
I love the way you've started each stanza with "take me back...."
I know the feeling, I split up with my ex just over 2months ago and that's all I felt for the first 4weeks
Great write!
x.x.x
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