Take my hand
touch me I say
yes, I am real
a being
just like you.
My life is as important as yours
so why can't we sit
talk
solve our problems this way.
Guns are unnecessary
life is
Author notes
Just found this contest and thought it worth trying to come up with something. Don't know if I did something worthy of it tho. I did try.
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A contest entry
- DO or Die! by Purush.
550 points, ended September 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite-palooza by swim.x.
1650 points, ended October 6, 2008, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a lovely write! I love the emotion here, and how thought provoking it is. well worthy of the gold.
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You take 'short and sweet' to a whole new level. Not that this was.. sweet, but it was great! Now I'm just confusing myself. What I'm trying to say is that it was a great, short poem. And I like that kind of thing
Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Chin up,
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thanks for the wonderful comments on my poem life is. I really appreciate.
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oooh i like this soooo much
great job
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Glad that you liked it. I liked the picture.
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Life is more important than guns anytime, anywhere. You did write something worthy alot of depth in what you are saying. Good luck in the contest.
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thanks for the comments. I appreciate you liked this.
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Wonderful
Very creative and so full of truth. Best of luck in the contest.
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thaks for the comment. I hoped that it was okay. Thanks for telling me.
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Throttle the idea of arming ourselves with guns
very good indeed
let thousands of flowers bloom on the space of war field
let fraternity lead our lives to peaceful co existence
"My life is as important as yours
so why can't we sit
talk
solve our problems this way.
Guns are unnecessary
life is "
All the best in my contest -
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oh how I so agree with your comments and thoughts about the blooming flowers. Thanks for the comments.
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