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Cloud Nine

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Seduction at its finest

every time she sucked it

you could hear it "POP!"

 

over and over

she drove me insane

as I lay here

 

Cloud Nine

 

voluptuous lips slowly

devouring every part

conquering all of my emotions

 

like water in her hands

I slipped through

and fell so fast

 

into her erotic fantasy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Option #2 From Kathy's Comments
40-60 Words

A contest entry

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    You did an excellent job with this prompt. I must say you didn't even need the picture with this poem. your words were vivid enough.. Outstanding poem

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • onesugar gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Very seductive and captivating...makes me want to go suck...on a lollipop LOL!!

    Good luck with this
    ~sugar~


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 7, 2008
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    wow nice pic lmao

    nice poem dude good job


  • dlviper
    September 7, 2008
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    made me sigh....mmmmmm


  • Sweetangelgrace
    September 7, 2008

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    Whewwww....This is breathtaking,Mentally and sexually stimulating.
    Thank you for writting such a poem. luved it.

    You go boy!!!

    ~~GRACY~~


  • moon2u
    September 7, 2008
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    I am giggling here
    I love this one
    even the gif is seductive


  • Camille Morin gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    The reader is seduced along with you. A compelling piece. I love it.
    Sincerely,
    Camille Morin


  • trekkergirl
    September 6, 2008

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    very interesting. Written very well. Loved the picture. It went perfectly with what you wrote. My thoughts were right there with you...I didn't look at the picture first. Read the poem while it was downloading. Then looked at picture. Boy I was right on. Good write indeed!

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