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Addicted Darkness With-in

Deep inside a mood beyond touch
swarms the body into lucid love
thorns of pain feel good
pain of brake-ups satisfy
beware lady loosing your love
this dark deceit within steals
he is mine for a night
maybe more, if I deem him good enough
like savvy and butter he'll melt
loves arms open, take him for granite
my darkest desire within-
brakeing  his vows to me
the nightmare is mine to give
shame the roses he sent-unappreciated
candy so sweet in my lap
call me I won't tell you of your hell
addicted infliction of ever pain
the darkness we weave...
spider's from a web enjoying the feast

to torture another, as we feel

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Ok...I want you to write about the darkness within you and how it can be addictive. You know what I mean if you’ve been through it. Don’t choose this one if you don’t get it.

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  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    September 7, 2008

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    wow this was beautiful! i love your style of writing! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • blondone
    September 6, 2008

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    Awe, yes the deep web of lies and deceit oh so very addicting I see these words in a plain picture as I read so the imagery is grand the words flow with ease the emotions are strong written with talent best of luck in this contest