Dizzle Funk
By: D Saul So Sexy
Girl, I' am going to suprise you
and reserve the midnight tower
just for you,so I can set you free.
I want you in red because its something
about that brown skin flesh that put ya
boy Darius to the test.
My man going to pick you up at four
so you can go get pampered with all
the glamour touches because I need
you at your absolute best, don't even
think let me handle everything while
you're making me sweat.
I arrive at the spot before you
to make sure that the caters set up
everything just right to make you feel
exotic in your high heel red shoes.
The pink and red rose petals are on point
and Christian Scott and the band
is over there just rocking the joint.
There goes the limo and the red silk
scarf is tied over your eyes and all
I see is those solid thick thighs
and the firmness of your noticeable breast.
made me clinch my sexy chest.
I walk over and take your hand
and you moving your hips seductively
saying oooh thats my jazz jam.
Thats when i gave them the clue
to play your absolute best "She"
and i stood behind you and moved
the scarf off and that smile just
broke me down and you just scream.
You're the lady in my path so ya
boy did his studying on you and I had to
do my math. We slow danced slowly and
this is my vision when I get to meet
you for a second time but now were're alone.
You have your hands around my kneck
and we are staring in to each other eyes
and I surely want to put my full lips
up to your full lips to get me a sweet kiss.
We both took a deep breath
and inhaled this moment and all I know
is that you are the lady who deserve
the whole nine of my D Dizzle Funk.
I want to lay into the music with you and
remember all your special qualities,
that keeps me smiling at you passionately.
© Darius C., All rights reserved
Author notes
Dizzle Funk
In a list
A contest entry
- Jazz Festival by theredcatjazzoflove.
900 points, ended September 24, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Dizzle Funk
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ahhhh.... a sexy read this is that I enjoyed reading!!!!!
There goes the limo and the red silk
scarf is tied over your eyes and all
I see is those solid thick thighs
and the firmness of your noticeable breast.
made me clinch my sexy chest.
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hey ga
ye i had to do my thang thnx....D
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i so love this a whole whole whole lot you blew meaway with this good luck
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very nice and romantic lol
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There is a jazzy melody written here poet. I would look at editing the typos for the contest sake.
There is a sultry vibrancy in this poetry. The jazz sounds are easily heard, and you did a splendid job with detail. Don't know if I've ever commented on your work before but I like your style, and I dig your kewl groove. Hope the lady knows she's loved.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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thanks mrs.renee and yes you have i will do that
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heh this was very sexy to read
*made me clinch my sexy chest* made me laugh hahaha
nice job on writing a beautiful piece -
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thanks ga
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ok i love it but some of that stuff is like wow and he didn't write that but its great like always!!! xoxo daijah!!
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baby ga you done changed your damn name you gettin a whoopin
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very nice poem here very nice duck head good luck in advance in the contest
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I love this JAZZ
Great job on this 'D' good luck honey in the contest, sure you will do well.
_Ephiphany_
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thanks ga for droppin in supportin ya boi
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