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subtle

she catches the sunlight
in her iris
dancing along
to a lonely beat

like cinderella caught
in her cascading tendrils
and the evil step-mother's curse

dreams and fantasies
catch her
as she falls through them
gently, numbly

subtly.

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  • Riamh
    September 10, 2008
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    Good imagery here, lovely write, good luck!
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