Nobody understands how much I miss you,
I miss how much we used to talk,
And I miss the things we used to do.
I try not to admit to myself,
That I still feel this way..
Nobody knows I still wake up,
Thinking of you each day.
I still think of you,
And I really do miss you,
And I would give up everything I have....
To be everything we're not....
Tell me if you like this one!
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This is beautiful
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awe that's short sweet and amazing. You'r little words say big things. You're got the talent and i'd love to see you put it to the test on a new big piece...Good job on this write.
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Excellent write
Keep up the work!
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i quite like this piece, i'm quite a fan of freewrite poems, although i find them very hard to do myself. ^_^
i thoroughly enjoyed. it's sad, depressing and heartwrenching.
The only thing i hope is that the person behind this poem is okay. xoxo
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Short works well in this case. Very well done! Sad yet emotional. I understand what you mean by this and I can say that I know what you are feeling. I feel your pain...
ANYWAYS, well done!
Sydney
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beautifully written...i feel the pain u feel in every line you have written, its amazing how you wrote this...and how you ended it...just fits it all together
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My dear this is short, but well written. I enjoyed this. I see the pain flowing within your words. Great write! Blessed BE! ~~Iridessa~~
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I like it, short but very well written. I know very much how this feels. Keep up the writing, you do very good work.
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I understand how you feel. to want everything to just go back to the way it was. this was very easy to relate too. i really like how it felt as if you were taking the feelings i have right now and wrote them down. That was very well written. --Cassidy
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