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I Did, I Do, And I Will

If I hadn't met you, I wouldn't like you,
If I hadn't liked you, I wouldn't love you,
If I wouldn't love you, I wouldn't miss you...
But I did, I do, And I will.

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  • Emerald-Spirit
    September 29
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    Powerful words. Great write. Xds-gX


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    October 25, 2008
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    pretty!
    But I did, I do, And I will
    prettyful!


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 16, 2008

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    POWERFUL words you have penned here. Wonderful! I mean it. It is so sad. To love someone & it to be over. I am sorry for this for you! If you need me I am here. I have not gone no where! ♥ ~~Iridessa~~


  • Pretty Girl
    September 6, 2008

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    Awesome

    How romantic and beautiful.. My favorite part is "If I hadn't liked you, I wouldn't love you," that is just amazing. I am in a relationship with someone and when i read this it made me think of him. How are eyes first met and how he made me feel when he said he liked me. The title couldn't be any better it is just an all around great write and is my favorite poem of all time so far.. I think you should write more in it and make it even better than better.. Keep writing you are amazing at it.


  • Midniterose
    September 6, 2008

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    This is cute. Very short, but very sweet. i like the chain of events being romantic. Often you see cause and effect in "sad" poems or poems of hatred. This was good. Thank-you!

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