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First l0v3.

After all the times we shared,
Our many, many kisses
I would have thought you loved me more than that
I'm lost; I don't get what this is

I thought you loved me just as much
the stars, the sun, the moon
I thought we'd be together forever
yet it ended much too soon

Alone on my front porch,
trying to understand
what went wrong and where you quit
walking, talking hand in hand

You were my love- my first FIRST love
And you, I'll never forget
Although it hurt to see you go
You- I won't regret

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  • BitterDreamer
    September 16, 2008

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    such a sweet poem with a lot of emotion. I think about every girl has been here.
    I though twe'd be together forever but it ended so soon...
    ahh I loved that part. it always ends WAY too soon.
    great write!