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Anticipation

The moon weaves its light,
embracing our bodies, and our
shadows move gently on the wall.

Even in the pale illumination,
I see your eyes darken with expectation.
I lean forward, our mouths barely touching,
with the feel of warm breath sensual on our lips.

I can feel the heat of you drawing me in, closer,
until our lips meet… softly, tenderly.

I love the faint taste of your lipstick,
warmed by the heat of your lips
and the tenderness of our kiss. 

How I would enjoy pushing your hair back
and allowing my kisses to move across your cheek…
to the welcoming heat of your neck…
moving upward to trace the outline of your ear…
then back to find your mouth…
feeling the welcoming opening as our tongues touch,
exploring the intimate feel and sensations of each other…
my hands cradling your face softly…
feeling the rising passion of the moment but
holding it back to enjoy the moments of our kiss…

Anticipation is nature’s aphrodisiac
and moments like these are the heart's memories.



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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Passion by Melindee (www.deviantart.com)
15 – 30 lines (24 used )

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  • Angelflower
    September 12, 2008

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    This was really really good.. very soft and loving.. With some sensuality mixed into it.. Bravo! thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Lucy.
    September 11, 2008

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    Very nice. Love the title too!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    ahhhh this is beautiful, written from the heart most definitely.. your words draw me in.. and I was captivated with each & every line. your heart shines with each word that you've written. *big sigh* this is a place that I would love to be right now. very sensual, full of love. this moment would be just the beginning of the heart's memories.

    good luck in the contest my lover

    though this one is gold as far as I'm concerned..


    kat


  • Angels hero
    September 6, 2008

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    Such passion is a beautiful thing. This is most definitely filled with love . You have a wonderful way of writing.


  • trekkergirl
    September 6, 2008

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    Wow! I can feel anticipation in every word you have written in this wonderful poem. Great job here.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    I'm looking forward to seeing what you write my lover


    good luck in the contest

    kat

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