Oh to gently sway and drift through life's graceful river
when at creation God so graciously delivered,
with each curve and bend His beauty surrounds
and I'm left with such feelings that surely astound.
Each tree and mountaintop loom with such grace
and tranquility certainly abides in this place,
soft skies above blanket this scene
as my spirit is nurtured in belief so serene.
This river I drift along has me feeling subdued
while peace in my heart I constantly persue,
viewing this pristine place made for all
makes me realise that within this world I'm so small.
Author notes
Image #7
courtesy of freephoto.com.)
In a list
A contest entry
- 'Images From Around the World' by Cynthia Gaines.
2000 points, ended September 19, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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I'd like to thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, 'Images From Around the World' with your beautifully thought-provoking poetry. The imagery was perfect for this piece!!
Judging will be done soon, and I wish the best of luck to you!! Thanks again, and have a great day!!!
Take care, Cyn


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THERE WAS SO MUCH WONDER THAT WENT INTO YOUR POETRY. GOD IS SO AWESOME. IF WE COULD JUST STOP AND LOOK AROUND US WE WOULD IN DOUBT KNOW THAT THERE IS A GOD. YOUR POETRY BROUGHT THIS OUT TOO. GOOD WORK! KEEP WRITING

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Good luck I know you'll write something wonderful



