I watch
grinning
as you play with my
emotions
desires
dreams.
Your innocence is feigned
as you play your teasing
game of suggestion.
And yet, I watch and
find enjoyment in
feelings of desire
and even lust.
Lost feelings that
remind me that
life is about these moments
playful, joyous, silly.
We’re too old for games…
…but don’t stop.
Please.
Author notes
Option 2.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Kathy’s Comments
40 – 60 words (and I used them all 
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A contest entry
- PIF Adult Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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LOL, brilliant ending! Well done on the gold.
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We are never to old to play games
Great poem
Lost feelings that
remind me that
life is about these moments
playful, joyous, silly.
best wishes
Julie
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It was great, keep it up.me
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LOL your superficial. just because i didnt get the poem dosent mean it ok to laugh at me. big fucking deal i didnt get it.
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Too obvious, huh? Glad you enjoyed it anyway...
Ken
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Wow! This is excellent! I really enjoyed reading this. It kind of reminded me of two people in love yet not necessarily young love. People who are mature yet would love to see that wonderful thing young love all over again. This was very well written. Thanks for sharing it.
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I love this poem for many reasons. which I'm sure you are aware of. I love the entire poem, especially the last 7 lines. I read this one over many times and brought a smile to my face..
good luck in the contest
kat
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ok, i dont get this one
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It was a reserve, silly (LOL)... Try it now - you'll get it - promise http://allpoetry.com/poem/4576313
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so how do i read it? i dont really get the whole reverse poem thing i guess
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It's English dear... top to bottom, left to right
... the indents are just for emphasis...
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ok.......
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