Eyes peeled back in horror,
disbelief drowns my head.
I want to overcome this. God, please
give me the strength. How could
he do this to me? A child waiting,
solemn- shiny paint with no chips.
He stooped down. He did it.
A child, God. How? Forgive me, please,
I am tainted. A lord must know my faith.
I never meant to succumb. But words,
they fell from me. He took them.
Why did he do it? So young, so pretty.
A peacefulness shaken
by the hands of a devil.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh..the sense of the pain and the sense of the fear is seen in the every word of this effective poetry..a touching work indeed..well done...

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Oh gosh!
This is so heart-wrenching
I can hear the tears in the childs eyes
I can feel the pain in the childs scream
You make this piece so hard to read
But yet, so easy to understand.
It's so hard to watch a child
go through such hard things in life.
When something like this happens,
I want to reach out and save
every child I hear about.
Children are innocent creatures
they should not be treated with such
injustice and with no dignity.
Thank you for sharing this painful piece.
Much Luv & Respect!
TT




