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Never Enough

It's never enought to say i love you.
You always want more from me.
You tell me you love me.
Then you go back and love her.
Why was i so blinded by you.
I can't help but cry to you.
It's a part of me that never goes away.
You truley did break my heart.
You broke my trust i had in you.
It never seems like i could
truly confine in you.
All the promises broken and
untrue.
There's just so much i can't
take in anymore.
The pain is just to great to deal
with out you.
It feels like a never ending
needle in my skin.

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  • Deathanddecay
    October 29

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    ........ this true this is an emotion that i feel all the time........ sarah your r my world and you know that i love you so much but i never feel like i can show that enough to keep you happy ...............


  • hks
    November 11, 2008
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    so much pain

    our world is violent

    [id applaus but sadly im too poor.]

    anyways,
    stay strong


  • Sai Amartya
    October 12, 2008
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    I have no words.


  • camus gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    I feel for you my friend since your poem depicts all the pain of betrayal and distrust in your boyfriend (or girlfriend). It is so easy to be "blinded" by love and so difficult to extricate yourself from the person you care about, even if you feel he/she is "like a never ending needle in (your) skin". I send you my love. Tony x


  • love-SEX-magic
    September 10, 2008
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    wow its like we are living the same life.

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