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Dance of Joy

Child of night,   
in moon’s glow I delight. 
A whispered prayer from lips I dare, 
magic is in the air.   
Gather round,     
sing with me,   
all around us is the sound, 
of the winds in the trees.   

Fire burning high,   
sparks twirling in the sky. 
Dance around,   
for to each other we are bound, 
to the earth and all living things. 
Rejoice in each life!   
Know that the mother herself sings! 
Let go all your worries and your strife!

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I don't like the ending of this one. Any suggestions?

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    I happen to like the ending! This is really good

    Fire burning high,
    sparks twirling in the sky.
    Dance around,
    for to each other we are bound,
    to the earth and all living things.
    Rejoice in each life!