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Cops and Toothbrushes

Cops and Toothbrushes
they both take away scum

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  • Scyphon
    November 23, 2008
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    LOL, thats so cute
    I love it. Really made me laugh

  • Going Forever
    October 10, 2008

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    Cops and Toothbrushes

    Cops and Toothbrushes
    they both take away scum

    Very Short and sweet poem. I can see that you are going to be a very talented writer when you get bigger Good work


  • Number-1-Popcorn-Fan
    September 24, 2008
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    cops and toothbrushes

    lol this is cute and funny SUNSHINE PRINCESS. i like it! keep writing! Number-1-Popcorn-Fan


  • longlife
    September 15, 2008

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    Cops and Toothbrushes
    they both take away scum,Its a short poem but it makes sence, thats pretty cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your a great poet

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    great

    Wow sweetheart!This is somewhat different from some of your other poems. Quite an outspoken write for something so small; I liked it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. I love you.
    Daddy


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 7, 2008

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    Great work Sunshine Princess. It's true and quite funny too. Well done. Good luck in the contest
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • Melodies
    September 6, 2008

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    So very smart and cleverly true!

    WOW... the more I think about it, the more images come to mind and I really like your cops and toothbrushes idea here! GOOD THINKING!


  • Slick99
    September 6, 2008

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    Cops and Toothbrushes

    this is hilarious Genna!!! you are so cute and funny!!! best of luck in the contest, because this is so funny and cute!! keep it up!!! -slick99

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Haha this is funny you did a great job here and made me laugh good luck in the contest sweety best wishes and much love always


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    September 6, 2008
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    Oh my. Haha. This is funny and so true! Lol. You are too cute. Good luck! Love you. <3


  • Princess Hanon
    September 6, 2008
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    short but true =)
    love it good luck in the contest =)


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    cute sweets
    i love u lil one


  • penman gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Excellent

    Aww, this was so full of laughs. You did great. Best of luck in the contest with this great short poem.


  • mitchie
    September 6, 2008
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    ok this is funny good luck,miley24 aka lily


  • Hope Angel silver member
    September 6, 2008

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    Oh my gosh Genna!
    You are too funny.
    I love you and good luck in the contest

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