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Poet Tree

Wings of light,
free, not tethered to the bend of branch,
I hear a sound like clapping and laughter
and running tap shoed feet.

A fire has flattened another forest...

A shadow pauses on a rock,
I touch it with my own.
It is a tree of questionable name
but green just the same
on this hill
where I thought black stubs only remained.

A shadow is proof of substance,
I tell the tree,
with all this ethereal sound and light
proof that you and I are real.

Folly drawn my love, the tree replied,
the blue is always changing.
Now it curves upon the mountain
not held tight against my breast,
see it take on gravity.

I see, I said to tree.
So many places hurt now gone
like shadow on the rock now turned to sun,
and caught within the memory
a tree becomes a song.







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A contest entry for: Poems About Poetry or Poets.

Write a free verse poem about poetry or poets.
Make it new. Make it Fresh.

Painted Doodle by: Peter Saw.
Image url:http://website.lineone.net/~peter.saw/doodles/curly.jpg

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 16, 2008
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    Sometimes we must go through the "fire" to become cleansed. Your poem frees the reader into clear thought. I love the metaphor used, and the personification from the tree's perspective. Elegant poetry with a wondrous message!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • malmadre gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    The ones who escape the fires in life will proudly show their regrowth and cast a bigger shadow. You cast a big shadow poet! Very natural and I love your presentation.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 11, 2008

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    Oh I actually heard and felt the rush of wind between bare branches. Nicely penned. And I add to Wanda's comment...there can be no light without its shadow.... Great poetry writing!!!


  • Malabu
    September 9, 2008

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    certinly this is different...conversations of mind and heart...a shadow is proof of substance says much to me, touching it with yours speaks to me also...to a poet, thoughts become alive like this writting


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    I love the ending...Brilliant...
    Beautiful entry!

    Lynda


  • Anu-Nataraj
    September 7, 2008

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    lovvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllyyyyyyyyyy poet !!!!!!
    A very good personification !!!
    lol
    ~Hugs~


  • Sonja
    September 7, 2008

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    I see you are new on ap site but surely not a new one at the poetry stage. This is wonderful imagination, new and fresh, very poetical. Beautiful poetry.
    ~Sonja~


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    Fantastic. You really did a great job with the prompt, taking it and making it your own. I love the imagery in it. Best of luck in the contest!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • eves shadow
    September 7, 2008

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    Not really the type of poetry I'm into, but I can honestly say that it is a beautiful piece.
    It was like reading a book I can't put down. All the little details of descriptions were very inspiring. I imagined word for word in my head as I read and I absolutely loved it!
    Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your beautiful mind.


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    'a shadow is proof of substance' made me pause and reflect, taken at once to Plato's cave and the shadows on the walls - then you turned the rock to the sun, and the shadow shifted. Poet tree becomes a song. Lovely. I'm singing along.

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