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M a N N E Q U I N S

 

Potent and Potential suspects

apply for jobs

without reasons.

By complications

of rebirth

he is bound, with

cloak and dagger

opportunities

within one's mind.

Still she holds you tight,

cuddles your Dick

with licks,

twists and splits

you in two...

without a doubt;

the memory starts to fade

deeply into the abyss

of fractured

political Pussy.

The soul has festered

and is now used

to fertilize

stolen

Identities.

Relaxed and smoothe

talkers

are the victims

that become

easily

absorbed into

the deep throats

of cum sewage

in the world

of Karma Sutra.

Sober thoughts

are the elements

of many Fantasies...

the Dragon

in a dress

to impress

Kings.

When in reality

we are divided

by

Individuality

of

being

perky Breasts,

Fat Asses,

parted legs

and as you pay close attention

she's only a

Mannequin.

Beautiful on the outside,

but cold and hollow

within and without

a

Clue.

Author notes

This is originated from a conversation that myself and a close friend had the other day.

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 19, 2008
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    you are naughty! so delisciously I might add lol
    did I tell you I liked naughty?


  • ennovy silver member
    November 11, 2008

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    Now thats an inspired write...just from your conversation you culled a masterpiece of spoken word.I adore it when you take to to the curb. I know how the world is and you captured it perfectly.....excellent..G'momma


  • raingoddess gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    So True

    You speak so deeply, and I feel each and every word, what is the worth of the so called perfect woman, can you truely be happy with one that has no feelings for another, hollow on the inside but a beautiful perfact shell on the outside. Excellent write Sis, you deserve more then just three little clappy men for the one, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


    • Ephiphany
      November 11, 2008
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      Hey sis

      thank you again for commenting on this I appreciate you and Godmother Novy more than words can explain. Hope to see both of you really soon

      Love ya
      -E


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    The poem is pretty tight and it is very strong. I read it three times. I noticed the title with the small 'a' and I noticed that way that the final stanza separated from the rest of the poem by my favorite image, I use that one a lot, definitely made me think. I did not read this poem wanting to think about things, but now I am. The objectification of women creates an Individuality between people, just as racism creates a space filled with darkness and impending violent trashing we look across and repaint the other person to suit our own needs with. I don't know if this is what the poem approaches for the writer, but beyond the obvious strengths of it, its other levels, this is the one that brought my head around each time I read it. Parts of it are worthy of some of the great writers in the hip hop world, and in the world of ballads as well. Thank you for writing this the way did. Really good poetry explores things way beyond the words of the work itself, and draws the reader into realms of exploration of their own longing despair and the feeling that there is something terribly wrong now in the world, as bad as the world has been, as well as something encouragingly right as the existence of poetry such as this proves. Bravo. You are a fine writer. I shall return to read more of your art.

    Moqui


    • Ephiphany
      November 11, 2008
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      Hi.

      thank you so much for your comment. I am just now getting around to reading comments and leaving remarks. Thank you again, I really appreciate your time and I shall do just the same with your art.

      All the best,
      Ephiphany


  • The Sphynx
    September 17, 2008

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    Well now, I must say this one caught me by surprise as I was not expecting the strong barrage of language. It was quite the real-life depiction of such people. Indeed, the write was creative in both expression and verse.

    ~Sphynx."


    • Ephiphany
      September 17, 2008
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      Uh oh!

      I have no idea who wrote this and framed me
      I have my moments...not many, but one of my friends (a guy) was talking, and he wanted for me to write my thoughts about the conversation, so I won a dinner certificate for Mo

      He loved it
      Thanks MeMe


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    l.o.l.

    Well I didn't see this...cumming! Very nice surprise
    those damn shifty mannequins! l.o.l. yeah, nice.

    • Ephiphany
      September 14, 2008
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      LOL

      yeah I know, huh? Good morning and Thanks for the comment

      -e-


  • lostangel07
    September 12, 2008

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    Your poem weaves the reader in until they are entranced. This is a poweful, seductive and emotional write. Wonderful job.


  • cep2008
    September 10, 2008
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    MUAHHH

    All I can say is that you are SEXY as Hell(I mean Heaven!)buy luv.


    • Ephiphany
      September 12, 2008
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      Awww cep u makin me
      Thank you for stopping by
      I appreciate you so much.
      Muahhh right back at 'cha

      _ephiphany


  • HaleyMary
    September 6, 2008

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    I love this write, Sis. I liked the ending. Says so much about society. I think it can be quite true for some people. They can be very beautiful people, but can turn out to be jerks. I tend to steer clear of those people, though. Growing up in a small town full of jerks has made me run as far away from jerks as possible whenever I encounter them. as far as I'm concerned, if a person is mean on the inside, they appear to me as ugly on the outside, too. Thanks for sharing your talent and keep that pen flowing.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    very nice job here i liked it you stepped outside of being prissy and got right on down with it and you know that is exactly what i like you brought it artist i enjoyed this

    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2008
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      Thank you Love'

      So glad you liked this, I suprised myself
      Love you


  • onesugar gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    This is fantastic, not everyone is as they appear to be. your ending fantastic..thought provoking sis.
    All the best to you
    ~sugarcookie~


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Hey!!!!!! This is great!!! I really really like this one

    When in reality
    we are divided
    by
    Individuality
    of
    being
    perky Breasts,
    Fat Asses,
    parted legs
    and as you pay close attention
    she's only a
    Mannequin.

    Beautiful on the outside,
    but cold and hollow
    within and without
    a
    Clue.

    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2008
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      Thanks hottness

      you know I always appreciate your comments and visits.

      _Ephiphany_


  • secberm
    September 6, 2008
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    Well done, sis. Write on. One.

    Dez

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