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Listen to your heart



 You've touched my heart in a special way
I am grateful each day
Every day I pray
that you'll never be in dismay
nor feel alone when I'm away
in a way I'm trying to say
 I love you and never want to go astray

 


 

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Word Prompt ~ A. listen to your heart.
Picture Credit Is from deviantart@kiera-sama

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  • Ylova silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Awww. This is so beautiful. Congratulations on the Bronze

    Well done.

     

    Much love

    Ylova


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 17, 2008
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    Awwwwwwwww this reads like a prayer and that together with the pictures is really great....

    It's good to read some of your words again...
    I've missed reading and writing myself too...the muse was gone and my time is very little....But now I am here...

    Good luck in this contest

    XXJeannette


  • Luckintheshadows
    September 7, 2008

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    Simply....beautiful! I really can't add to that, there's such heart-warming emotion in these words, I want to go and hug someone right now!
    Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest,

    Luck.

  • Mrs. Priester
    September 7, 2008

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    wonderful.

    this is an amasing poem. i love it. good luck in the contest. oh and i drew the picture quite some time ago. it is on my deviantart account too. kiera-sama.

  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    cute cuz great rymeing
    i love you

  • sunshinegirl
    September 6, 2008

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    SIGH!!!

    This is truly beautiful! One can feel the love that went into these words! The title drew me in, and I am so glad I did not miss it! Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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