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Indecision


Several extremes of pleasure and pain.
(one for the road, two for the show)

Hopefully I can see you again?
(three in the park, four in the dark)

Or maybe, you’ve missed the train?
(five odd phone calls, six new curve balls)

Which I think would explain…
(seven old ways, eight great days)

…..your change of heart.

Any comments?

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  • Nangaleema
    October 26, 2008
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    playful, quick-paced. this is clever and fun. i like it. - NANGALEEMA


    • Neet
      November 2, 2008
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      Thanks again

      Glad you liked it. Have a great week! All the best Neet.