No. I don't know what life is!
Death, love, hope,all the same
I know nothing.Not even
What I needed to know.
I condemn myself to darkness.
This I know I can do
I attribute myself words like worthless
In my jail I will lie.
I howl as always to the skies
Wishing forgiveness and redemption
I flow in waves to hell,
An ocean of regrets and discontent.
I know my null value of queen
Of the kingdom of happy corps
In my world are both light and dark
And sun, sky and ailing girls.
I dream a home no man could give.
But I know nothing.
Not even what I neeed to know.
A contest entry
- Where's MY AP family? by Falling in Loveless.
300 points, ended September 20, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Haunting.
Readng this was kind of like reading from a journal that I didn't write, yet, there are my thoughts and lost feelings in words.
It's ironic that no matter how alone and lienated I feel, there will always be somebody all alone feeling the same.
(i hate irony)
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In our darkes moments we feel so alone and misunderstood that we think that we are the only ones that are going through that,when the truth is that millions of other people feel the exact same way.
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So true, so many people all feeling the same, standing right next to each other sometimes, still we might as well be stars in the sky, looking so close, but billions of light years apart and felling like we are the only one collapsing into a blackhole.
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awesome poem....i really loved ur use of words...thanks heaps for entering and good luck
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what a take on a personality
great write -
Heyy
Who would you like to be in my ap family?
i like your poem
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thx....I don`t know..... sister I guess or anything else you want
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thanks, ive been through quite a lot already. i love the poem and thanks for entering =]
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