The burning fires of desperation
Engulf down to my very soul
Scorching my inner peace
Leaving me charred and broken
Dark whispers sound through
Pushing me deeper into blackness
Filling my heart with sorrow
Razor-sharp daggers slice in
Tearing me to shreds
Casting ribbons of crimson down
Letting me fall on the ground
Dying in my own tragedy
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deep and isightful a Wonderful poem very well done, An excruciating and powerful piece of Poetryvery well done There were no errors. Or No typos. that. I Would change. I look forward to your next poem
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