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September haiku






Teacher's day -
under the streetlight
my secret gift





a crow sips
water from a leaky tap -
sudden rain




Author notes

Being the Principal and also a Teacher in Budding Mind's Nursery School, today I received loads of gifts. This is one such experience!

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  • patrick20traveler
    November 16, 2008
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    I like it.

    The crow sipping water is a nice touch. Thank you for your wonderful gift today.


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    I teach Drama/Theatre and Creative Writing. You captured this visual with fervor. I often see sights that become snapshots in my mind. This is an excellent picture. I wish you well in the challenge.

    Renee


  • Srinivasan
    September 8, 2008

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    Wow

    I serve as Lecturer and this year I received many wishes on Teachers day. Great to read ur poems and the second one is scintillating. All the best.

    • Sai Babas Lotus
      September 9, 2008
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      Thank you, Srini Jee! Happy Teacher's Day 2 U!!

      Warm regards,
      Charishma


  • azure85 gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Oh, it sounds like you had a wonderful day at school! All wrapped up in a delightful haiku, have a great school year ahead!


    • Sai Babas Lotus
      September 7, 2008
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      Hi!! Yes, it's a real cool one Thank you for your wonderful wishes. I really love my job and mainly because I operate from home !! This is what I always wanted!!!

      Charishma

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