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I feel like dirt
Around all of you
So low I'm not even allowed
On your shoe
This insane feeling of inadequatecy
The crippling feeling
The ruck from where
I want to be free
Lets just face it
I'm the bloody skivvy
Always doing as he is told
Or he'll get swept away by his
"Friends"

The mockery and personal cracks
I know they're all aimed at me
Just say them openly
Break the cryptic key
None of us need it
Especially me

Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback

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