cast in concrete,
her sins are accentuated,
put out there for all to judge,
and as she lies waiting
for some faint praise,
in her heart she knows,
she knows,
this is her triumph alone,
her solitude a punishment
for ignorance
of the sinful world's judgements
she lies in wait
a stark anticipation
of an opening that is surely
to let her down
Author notes
just a poem to try and gain entry...
Please tell me what you think
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Do you have stock in the Webster's Dictionary portfolio? Girl, you never waste a word, nor an oppotunity to join a few of them together with magic.
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Come out of that secret place in to your own light. so others can see. Wonderful poem very well done Powerful piece of Poetry There were no errors. Or No typos. I got my eye on you. I Would change. I look forward to your next poem
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this is really good ..... hi how are you.... thanks for sharing this with us..... hope all is well with you.....
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such a sad soulful ending..excellent flow and imagery..you emote her feelings so well in this one..
her solitude a punishment
for ignorance
of the sinful world's judgements
especially like this verse..isn't just like the world..to ignore their wrongs and judge another even more harshly..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste...
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