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Therapy?

A lot of people suggest
that I get some therapy.
I mean, is it that horrible
that I have A.D.D.?

Personally, I don't think I need it.
A majority of kids have A.D.D.,
no one bugs them about it;
just leave me alone and let me be.

I actually tried therapy once,
after four sessions, she kicked me out.
She said to go away and never come back,
but I have no idea what that was about.

I told her about school,
and my favorite movies, books, and dreams.
She cut me off when I was talking about cheese.
She must not like cheese, or so it seems.

So stop telling me to go see a shrink.
I don't want to talk to some creep!
Therapy is expensive,
popping bubble wrap is cheap!

You choose.

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Missa

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    LOL I think I would chose the bubble wrap. This had me giggling. I would never be caught dead in a shrinks office. LOL I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • peregrin
    November 23, 2008

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    Hello.
    Um... Alright, first this is a great write, I like it. It flows well.
    Sadly though, you are breaking a rule, number one. Sorry hunny, add a different poem, nothing can be entered if it has been entered in another contest.
    Gwen


  • Mirthryl
    November 3, 2008

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    Fun mental hopscotch/stream of consciousness write. Maybe she lost it on your vivid descriptions of cheese because she just started a new diet? Love the bubble wrap--fun, lets off steam, and entertains!


  • Hannie
    October 29, 2008
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    hahahaha awesome poem ....i loved it heaps !!! thanks for entering and good luck


  • aslanlight
    October 24, 2008

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    I like the bubble wrap idea! Whatever's harmless and gets you through. I don't understand how anyone could cut you off when you're talking about cheese, I mean, it's cheese!

    Cheers for entering and for being so open.

    Peace Georgia


  • poeticcaresses
    October 20, 2008

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    LOL - this is very cute. I don't know if it's poetic justice but it definately made me smile! Kicked out of therapy, that's too funny. Thanks for the laugh and good luck in the contest!


  • FreeTara
    September 25, 2008
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    I love this concept and you know what i wish i could get it thru people's head that shrinks aren't all that great. I am so anti shrink. I belive to that the bubblewrap is cheap and if that makes you happy thats the one to choose!!!
    Well done! awesome job, I have to say i LOOOOVE your work Missa!!


  • HereComesTheSun
    September 7, 2008

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    bubble wrap is cheep

    i LOVE THAT LINE super cute
    i actully am not a big shrink fan so i really loved this peice
    great work and congrats on making finalist

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