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Minds Tempest






Storms illume behind,
her resonating hopes,
as she lingers,
clenching onto sanity's pull.

Even after her love has passed,
her soul arrests,
vagabonding,
tarring,
upon each passer by,
pulling on their life's feathery fibers.







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  • Rclane gold member
    September 7, 2008
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    Like the take on prompt and nicely penned. Luck to you in contest.


  • Dmonik
    September 6, 2008

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    Nicely done Vik
    I like the style, word play and word choice in this piece

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