the vortex pulls me,
liquefied being
exaggerating your colors
delicate balances quantify being,
mesmerizing shades hanging in the wings
we stare off
non-committal,
the Switzerland of rainbows,
into your universe
explosions so bright
they must not be denied
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whispernthedark
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A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very lovely. Great wording and images that give a feel of soft, fluid movement. Very nicely done 'whispernthedark'.
Thank you for this lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest
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WOW!!!
Excellent imagery with colors. I love how you put the words with the painting!
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