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The cloak

Cover me oh Golden Cloak
for I am weak and mild
show me as I journey through
my innocence of child

Cover me oh Golden Cloak
for this journey will be long
but with your arms to protect me
I will be safe from harm

I can see the light ahead
and know that you are here
From you I get much comfort
There is nothing I should fear


So lead me on this journey
as I learn along the way
growing stronger in your path
from which I'll never stray

I am just a child that loves you
standing here in awe
So safe with your protection
who could ask for more




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  • Puppydog gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    This truly beautiful write brings to my mind my walks on a bike trail where there are canopies of trees much like this one pretty much all along the way.


  • Samplette gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    What a wonderful metaphor for Him..Golden Cloak. Beautiful and inspiring. Thank you so much for entering.
    Sam