Autumn is here
Red and gold leaves bedeck the trees
Autumn is here
Summer's gone by, Winter is near
Soon the leaves will dance in the breeze
Gone 'til the end of Winter's freeze
Autumn is here
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I LOVE Autumn ~ Do You? by Still Standing.
1200 points, ended September 15, 40 entries
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Love it
I love the repeating of the phrase "Autumn is here" such a great reminder throughout this peice very good job with the rondelet and very nice picture painted thanks for entering and good luck!
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I like the format of this piece. It depicts Autumn very nicely. I do feel it lacked some strength to it in certain places though.
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A remarkable Rondelet. Very well crafted. Beautiful imagery. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
Sam
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