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Climb To Nowhere



nothing grows
on this mountain’s
top 

and below,
the meadow is still
green

halfway there-

I drink…

the hemlock tea




Author notes

dragging a dead deer up a hill

my profound poety

writings of malabu

Amaranthine Lover i read the rules

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 2
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    reason for removal:

    - Please no poetry from November 2008 or January 2009. I can check the date it was written.

  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 1

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    suggestion:

    - Please put your user name and mine Amaranthine Lover in the author's notes so that I know who you are and that you read my rules.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Lovely and proufound, which I love...for you can read it many times and see many different meaning...excellent as always.
    Best to you!
    :


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Well,
    again my friend pouring so much in to just a few words,and brilliantly
    God bless...


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Great writing, Mal... this can be read in so many ways.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Samplette gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Extremely profound. A powerful piece of poetry. Well crafted and an enjoyable read. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam


  • just rob gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    What a huge little poem.

    This begs to be read aloud.

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