The sun will be your warm kiss
on my face
the rain will flow where your
fingers traced
the breeze will be your breath
on my skin
the moons shimmer will pull
me in
to the twilight where I know
you will be
I'll listen to her whisper as
you call out to me
as the darkness holds me in
a comforting embrace
I will lay with you until
the new dawn breaks
till the eyes of the night
sleep contentedly
from my dreams I will not stir
until the sun kisses me
Please tell me what you think
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This is a new idea to me!
I like how you equated a night on the beach to a romantic session with a lover . A good metaphor that you might one day choose to expand to its full poetential. It is an idea that should be made three dimensional and more vivid.
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Love it
definately sun-kissed words in this piece. I have truly enjoyed your work sis 
keep being the beautiful person inside/out 
Much love,
_Ephiphany_
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Thank you sis...it is always good to have you come by...your comments are always appreciated.
Much love ~sugarcookie~
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very nice picture here you put in one mind with thi story sug i think you did very great awesome job with this one
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Thank you hon for your constant support
always a pleasure
~sugar~
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Pretty
One of your best ones ever, sis. I can feel the love in this one. Good one, sis.
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Thanks bro
always a pleasure to have you read
your sis ~sugar~
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL - and sounds like the poetry of a woman in love - to me!
till the eyes of the night
sleep contentedly
from my dreams I will not stir
until the sun kisses me
A very beautiful piece, Sugar - that flows as smooth as whipped cream on hot chocolate with a flake which I know is one of your favorite treats. Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this one with me on this stormy Saturday which will be a lazy day for me to say the least! Wayne is a lucky man - if you ask me! HE! HE!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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I am sweetie...we are both lucky. Thank you as always hon for your wonderful comment, and your constant support.
Soon be hot choc and whipped cream weather whoohoo
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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