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Can anyone hear me?
I know my voive is making sounds,
I know that there's people all around,
No one seems to notice me,
I'm the one standing here bleeding,
I'm the one here screaming
for anyone to see me here...
Is there anyone out there?
Am I really just dreaming
will no one will save me?
Surely someone would care...
Anyone at all can care...
No one cares.
No one notices!
Hello!
Hello!
Can you hear me?!
I'm here! Right here!
Someone save me from this solitude,
My wrists are bleeding!
How can you just walk on by?!
I'm standing right here, say something to me!
Say any thing to me!
But you still just walk by!
I'm real!
I'm real!
My blood drains and I'm dying
No one listens
No one cares
I'm alone
as always
still alone
still bleeding
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Author notes
demonic.chanel.420
A contest entry
- Teen Angst by Perfect-Pain.
333 points, ended October 24, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent flow. you are going on my finalist list.
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Anguish, pure anguish
And yet I see no one in sight, that would care, but the room is full of people and air, and as I stumble and gasp for air, the room is full, but there's no one there. We, who suffer, are often ignored, while those who succeed, are plainly bored. But we have to get passed that and be strong, wonderful poem, keep writing and take care ...
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woah, man..
This is so intense.
Anyways.. What are you into, and whats your name?
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