In the later time of life
when all is said and done
We all must walk this path
and though we have our friends
We will all walk it alone
our friends can not walk it with us
Those who have a deep spiritual belief
will not truly be alone
Those who believe in nothing
will walk a far different path
One of darkness and shadows
one where you will truly be alone
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A nice take on the picture..the pathway to Heaven. Nicely crafted. I think you so have a couple misspells..In the first line.."live", maybe life? Also, in the 7th line, "believe", maybe belief?
Still, a good piece. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Thank you
I have corrected the miss-usage and miss-spellings as you have suggested. Spelling is one of my worst subjects and if you use a real word the spell check won't tell you if it is the one that belongs, just that it's spelled correctly.
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Sis this is so very true...love you...best of luck in the contest!
Az
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