On a tree covered lane I held the hand
Of the most remarkable friend I ever had.
And though we're now old, the world can see
That wonderful look she still shares with me
Like the oak trees of fall that rise high above
Our autumn years are filled with the colors of love.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Number one I love short wtites. Yours is well penn ed and you did a wonderful lwork to arouse emotion. Three for you.
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The words of Love ...
have their own seasonal display ... Thank you for sharing your colors.
Spring wishes to an Autumn region.
Love
Myra
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Dennis this is lovely
Are you still with this lady? Is this your wife? If so she is a very lucky lady.
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Oh, this is a romantic piece of poetry. Very well crafted. I like the sereneness of this. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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