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Twinkle Star

Magical visions

of fairies and imps,

Glittering sparkling.

As young eyes can glimpse.

 

At mermaids and treasures,

in far away lands.

Where dolphins can speak,

where father time stands.

 

Man on the moon,

has a whimsical grin.

Stars dancing to sounds,

on a child's violin.

 

Music awakens,

a mythical sphere;

Where pixies, trolls,

elf's all share.

 

Sprinkles of star dust,

as rainbows appear,

in the mind of a child,

where there's never a care.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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sister

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  • Elfin
    October 2, 2008

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    Congatulations on winning gold with your beautiful poem. I'm sorry it took so long to answer but I have been away on holiday and have just returned. Well done. Val


  • Mat Larkin
    September 29, 2008
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    very good...

    magical and musical....well-done. I really dig this piece.

    Mat


  • Shadow Lynx
    September 14, 2008

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    Adorable, mystic and enchanting and perfect for the picture. Effortless rhyme made it a pleasure to read and the words danced in my head arond and around to a the music it creates

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    September 9, 2008
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    Hello. This is a cute little write; has a mystical ambience to it. Having seen the pic, I can understand how you have tied it in. The second to last stanza; line 1 and 3, the rhyme isn't as exact as in your other ones; deja vu, I said that about a recent poem of yours. Anyway, I wish you well in the contest, and in the extension of your family. My regards.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 7, 2008
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    yeah..

    this is my second time here sis! come on now i'm having withdrawls!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    L ET ME KNOW WHEN YOU GET IT WRITTEN

  • goalsv
    September 6, 2008
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    Great job, WOW this was awesome. LOL Just kidding, let me kow when it is finished so I can read.

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