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Good Bye


You can’t break me down,
I’m not your man,
you don’t own this heart,
don’t think that you can.

There’s a cold in your heart,
that doesn’t touch me,
and you can never cage,
this love that is so free.

You can try,
yes you can try,
I don’t know why,
no I don’t know why,
I just say good bye.

There’s a look in your eyes,
that shadows my heart,
like a storm brewing,
of thunder apart.

Words have been spoken,
you can never take back,
as your mind goes on the blink,
love is what you lack

You can try,
yes you can try,
I don’t know why,
no I don’t know why,
I just say good bye.

Sentiments of the moment,
pull the strings attached,
the ones that now let go,
only to become detached.

Tears flow so reckless,
from a heart of stone,
when all you had to do,
was not wish to be alone.

You can try,
yes you can try,
I don’t know why,
no I don’t know why,
I just say good bye.







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  • jt4mc
    September 7, 2008

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    I really like this. It has both a sadness and a joy or freedom. The sadness for the cold-hearted & the freedom in the strength of the one who says goodbye. I wish I could hear it performed with music because the lyrics are really very nice.

  • Tammy
    September 6, 2008
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    that is gr8
    i really liked it ..