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[Haiku] Seasons

indian summer-

under September skies
trees still dressed… in June





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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Excellent take here very well done indeed


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Beautiful! Yes, indeed, some of our trees have yet to change colors. Seems like there's a lot of holding on in nature. Great haiku! I wish you well in the challenge.

    Renee


    • Malabu
      September 12, 2008
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      thanks for dopping by Renee, appreciate your commentary too...


  • Candy6
    September 6, 2008
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    Really nice haiku

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