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Spring of Youth

 

Imbued in youth, cleansed of all illness,

strength returns and I am anew.

Ambient beauty leaves me breathless,

colors radiate a pearlescent hue.

 

A sweet bouquet fills the air,

letting me taste of perfection.

Pegasus struck his hoof with brilliant care,

allowing me to see my immortal reflection.

 

Stay by my side in your completeness,

as I continue my journey with you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Artwork by Pat Brennan

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  • kendhal22
    October 3, 2008

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    This is beautiful

    This is so beautiful and your words spew the essence of a poetic charm. I just love how you can spew such beauty. Kendhal22


  • Truetome
    September 30, 2008
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    congratulations on the bronze...samplette ♥


  • ShelleyA gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Good title and interpretation of the picture prompt. Heartfelt. A very nice story poem. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Very nice meter. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.

  • Truetome
    September 29, 2008
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    pretty ♥ narrative poetry.


  • Rowan Oak
    September 24, 2008
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    Beautifully writ! Best wishes in the contest!


  • Legend silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    It is a long time since last I clicked on your name Only now do i realize what i have been missing.Beautiful worded piece Good look in the contest


  • Malabu
    September 6, 2008
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    your devotion with tendrous heart speaks the gentleness of your kindered soul

  • jodygirl
    September 6, 2008

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    Your fantasy just reeks of truth. Perhaps that's what fantasy truely is in the end. Whatever it is...you wove an excellent poem with beautiful words, as usual.
    Good luck in the contest. This is great.
    In God's Love,
    Joan


  • daviscth
    September 6, 2008

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    I think you did a wonderful job with this picture prompt. The imagery in your words is awesome. Good luck in the contest.

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