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One Haiku

river freely moves

in an unbroken torrent-

passionate desires




Summer51


Author notes

My interpretation on the picture...although not a prompt.
The rapid flows of the stream is like an ardent expression
of love.


Summer51

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  • Lee Tai Wah
    September 19, 2008
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    Hi summer

    Ah, the river of passion! Great haiku.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Very good haiku Background is a little hard to read but well done

    • Summer52
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you Swan song for the nice comment.Really appreciate that. Now, I will have to rest.

      Thanks again.


      Summer51


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Your passion flows as brillaintly as the haiku written here. There is excitment in the rush. An excellent haiku. The best to you in the contest.

    Renee


    • Summer52
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you for the nice comment, poetryality.


      Summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 7, 2008
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    Ah, the river compared to passion--
    great, summer!

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