As I stand here calm but anxious,
staring down the dark cold street,
I wait, and I wait, and I wait...
"Father, where is she?"
sincerely I ask,
and I wonder,
would I make her happy?
"Father, I want to pray with her,
Father, I want to praise with her,
Lord, I want to serve with her,
To be honest Daddy,
I want to hold her.
Is she coming soon?"
My Father looks down at me,
with a smile He says,
"Seek me first,
than all these things shall be added unto you."
Author notes
I tried to do the alt 3 thing, it doesnt seem to be working for me :-( does it still count :-P.
P.S
this is not a pre-write, lol.
LOL, thank you for the sweet comments and the heads up!!! My AP name is wolfwatcher :-)
I chose option 2:
2.Write about waiting for love to come ;-)
A contest entry
- Finding Love [True Love Waits Forever][Awaiting Arrival Of Unborn Child] by stargazer..
400 points, ended April 20, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great write! And don't worry, she's sure to come in time ^^
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absolutely beautiful~ it worked
remember to put your name in the AN, as the contest stated.
Put God first in all things and you shall have the desires of your heart
Blessings,
Sassy
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Very Nice
Works for me bro! Love the innocent outlook on life.
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woot!! great write bro=]
and dont worry, shes comeing in time
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