Oh how I miss your loving face
Your pure intentions, loving embrace
And then I see I have been betrayed
How foolish of me
A string on a puppet, in your personal parade.
Drawing up the papers, saying we are done.
I dot my i-s, my signature, the battle was lost, not won.
Author notes
betray
signature
pure
string
drawing
i think i used all of the words correctly.
A contest entry
- Because You Want To Be Challenged, Right? by HagarenHanyou.
900 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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i like it!!!
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nicely done teen..as always happens
enjoyed



