Take me away
From my home in the sea.
Let me fly with you
Where you are my magical dream
Of seeing beyond the sea.
Will you accept my plea?
Together we will be free.
A magical horse
And a seeker...
Looking for their new destiny!
dragonheart1
Author notes
Artwork by Pat Brennan
A contest entry
- Fantasy Picture Inspired Contest IV by ShelleyA.
1000 points, ended September 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice title and good interpretation of the picture prompt. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow and tone. Nice rhyme and rhythm. Nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.
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nicely tied in with the picture! I love it! Best wishes in the contest!
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Awsome pic!
Great imagery used in this write. I like your take on this pic
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Hi sweetness,
You have written a great take on the picture promt.I wish you all the best in the contest.It's good to see you writting and sharing your thoughts with us all.I will get back to your poems as soon as I can.I have been rather busy writting myself, my muse is on the move again Lol.Take care and much love.
Your angel of whispers
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Oh, I enjoyed your take on the picture. Very nicely done. I wish you the best in the contest. Nice.
Sam
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a beautiful take on the promt good luck in the contest
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