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Choir

Wolves howl to the skies
Servants of the twilight moon
Heralds of the night.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 29, 2008

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    Yes!

    Glad you won Silver for this, it's exquisite. Wolves baying at the moon can be seen as a choir! I can see this clearly as if in the full moon. Heralds of the night...brilliant. You certainly have a way with words Sarah!


  • SmartBrick
    September 6, 2008
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    I LOVED the ritle w/ th poem!YAAAAAY!


  • ultimate beluga
    September 6, 2008

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    wow amazing rhythm and imagery! short and sweet and very well-written, good luck in the contest