Sitting here, counting the hours.
Waiting for time to pass, thinking of all the mistakes I've made.
Thinking of all the things I've learned.
Thinking of all the friends I've lost.
Just thinking of all the things I've earned.
Sitting here, counting the hours.
Waiting for time to pass, thinking of all the things I've said.
Thinking of all the things I'd re-do.
Thinking of all the people I'd thank.
Just thinking of everything, including what to do.
Sitting here, counting the hours.
Waiting for the time to pass.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Enkeli.
400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I really like the concept of this piece... I'm not that fond of so much repition, but you seemed to have pulled it off. Thank you for your entry.
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Enkeli
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