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5 haiku

a robin’s song
outside the shuttered window
hurricane warning


scratching
next to the roadway
a fox


one last swing
over home plate
end of the season


floating down
the waterslide
mid-day sun


a shadow
outside the window
an opened book


Author notes

The first haiku is this morning, we are waiting for Hanna to come through this afternoon.

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    This is an excellent series of hiakus well done indeed
    thank you for entering and good luck


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    What a revealing stream of haiku. I feel some anxiety in the lot. These hurricans are coiming so quickly, one after the other. Excellent visuals are written here. Be well, and safe. Good luck in the challenge.


    Always ♥

    Reneé


  • Candy6
    September 6, 2008
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    Great haikus