a robin’s song
outside the shuttered window
hurricane warning
scratching
next to the roadway
a fox
one last swing
over home plate
end of the season
floating down
the waterslide
mid-day sun
a shadow
outside the window
an opened book
Author notes
The first haiku is this morning, we are waiting for Hanna to come through this afternoon.
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended September 16, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is an excellent series of hiakus well done indeed
thank you for entering and good luck

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What a revealing stream of haiku. I feel some anxiety in the lot. These hurricans are coiming so quickly, one after the other. Excellent visuals are written here. Be well, and safe. Good luck in the challenge.
Always ♥
Reneé


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Great haikus




