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I'm a Bum

Hey there buddies, can you spare a dime
I have seventeen kids, and they have all done time
It aint because I've been married several times before
It's because six of my wives, have shown me the door
I'm an entrepreneur, this placard is a work of art
If you look closely at what it says, It gives one a kick start
There is magic in those words, it's all about life
I say it every day, to my childen and my wife
I say it to the postman, and the guy that takes my trash
So please spare me a dime, and gimme some of your cash.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 1, 2008

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    This is cute. I love the rhyme scheme and story in this. It's too bad that we have so many people in the world going through this. Great work here and congratulations to you on the Gold! A well deserved write!




    Jeremy0826


  • tawk gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    lol what a funny write and goes so well with the picture! Congrats on the Gold. Hugs Theresa


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 7, 2008

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    lol this is more along the idea that came to mind when I saw the picture but still not quite the same but a good write

    thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest